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Creatie proprie-Suna golul-
Ancutza
post Mar 8 2008, 03:03 PM
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Suna

Suna Golul,nelinisti se-mburda
Iar totul in jur e o nebunie absurda
Suna golul atat de dureros
Si totul in jur e cu capul in jos
Si fara niciun ocol
Suna totul a gol
Suna golul,e gata sa cada
E doar un gol cu covrgii in coada
Fara laute,fara de vlaga
Suna golul mai rau ca o doaga
Si fara nicio rushine
Suna golul din mine
Suna golul cu glas ascutit
De park ar fi un cutit
Si fara glume
Suna golul prin lume
Suna golul si iar isi repeta rolul
Suna golul...
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post Mar 8 2008, 04:28 PM
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ce senzatie de valvartej te cuprinde cand citesti asta (IMG:/laugh.gif) mi-a placut, poti sa mai pui daca iti face placere.


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post Mar 8 2008, 04:55 PM
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Uitarea


Te-alung sau te strang
In brate te frang
Prin fumul de pipa
Esti lunga risipa
O scurta zicala
In pestera goala
Si iarasi alergi
Prin libere legi
Si iarasi apuci
Ca vantu`ntre nuci


Te-as pune`n desaga
Ca timpul sa treaca
Dar in noapte te alunga
O rochie lunga
Si-un fosnet de-o clipa
Te-o face aripa
Si-un sir de poteci
Cu pleoapele reci
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post Mar 9 2008, 08:45 AM
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Si-un sir de poteci
Cu pleoapele reci



Super, super tare!

Explica-mi un pic poemul asta ca...eu is mai tare de cap...Imi place dar nu stiu daca am inteles bine asa ca...baga repede...Care e ideea?


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post Mar 9 2008, 09:15 AM
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Si-un sir de poteci
Cu pleoapele reci



Vrea sa semnifice o zi de toamna..Ma plimbam prin padure..plangeam era frig..si ma gandeam la problemele pe care le am..Carora pana la urma am reusit sa le gasesc o solutie..Sper ca te-am lamurit cat de cat...Si stai linisita nu sufar din dragoste:))..Toate poeziile astea sunt pentru "dragul"meu tata care a stiut sa-mi fwta copilaria :roll:


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